Two Miners

For storyboarding class, we are supposed to make any story about two miners underground. Without further ado, here is mine:

I feel the establishing beat isn't too clear. I can't show how they enter the mine from the other side of the world since we are restricted to an underground setting (although I clearly broke the rule in the ending).

Storyboard

The assignment was to breakdown 2 short films into 6 story beats. I might've not break it down properly since I feel like they're too long.

Sketchbook assignment for this week: